tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post6382444687304538630..comments2023-08-28T07:30:59.692-05:00Comments on MOVING ON TO THE PAST: Smoke and OlivesKathy Felsted Usherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-22219822003163480482011-10-09T22:13:01.422-05:002011-10-09T22:13:01.422-05:00Posted from e-mail
I tried and tried to leave you...Posted from e-mail<br /><br />I tried and tried to leave you a comment on your SC dialogue prompt to no avail.<br /> <br />Here's what I wrote the third time...fortunately I thought to copy it so I could send it via e-mail if it rejected again!<br /> <br />Hi Kathy. I think dialogue is one of the hardest things to write. I've been reading all this weeks entries out loud and yours was perfect. There wasn't a single word that felt contrived.<br /> <br />I really enjoyed what you shared here.<br /> <br />Thanks for linking up.Kathy Felsted Usherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-17011586590981568702011-09-30T18:21:45.914-05:002011-09-30T18:21:45.914-05:00I'm glad there was a limit on the words, I'...I'm glad there was a limit on the words, I'm not sure where this was going but I don't think it was anything good! LOL Thanks for visiting.Kathy Felsted Usherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-48966466103342452432011-09-30T06:15:54.056-05:002011-09-30T06:15:54.056-05:00That was great dialogue, could have read more! wel...That was great dialogue, could have read more! well done!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-67229986335273845882011-09-27T04:45:16.456-05:002011-09-27T04:45:16.456-05:00Even in St Louis there are exceptions to the smoki...Even in St Louis there are exceptions to the smoking ban. They are trying to make is across the board- not sure why. It seems to me that if I bar wanted to be smoke free, the non smokers would go there and the smokers would go where they allowed smoking. The ones that don't care can go anywhere. Go figure.Kathy Felsted Usherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-57608394387734645502011-09-26T18:17:28.649-05:002011-09-26T18:17:28.649-05:00I was just going to ask about the smoking in the b...I was just going to ask about the smoking in the bar, but I read your comments, and since I'm a smoker, I think I'll move to your area! Good take on the centus. laurieBargain Decorating with Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13582640485560903639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-869887602740233192011-09-25T19:54:43.503-05:002011-09-25T19:54:43.503-05:00Works well. I'm wondering where it will lead....Works well. I'm wondering where it will lead. ;) <br /><br />I enjoy creative writing. I would participate but I'm afraid my blog is not really mine and not oriented toward this. But I'll stop by and read Kathy.Mannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15396201693030286919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-40711258384969840842011-09-25T19:44:54.812-05:002011-09-25T19:44:54.812-05:00sounds like a very lively place that crowded smoke...sounds like a very lively place that crowded smokey place. I giggled when you lit the cigarette with the candle. great job.Dazee Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323163539682131873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-26407433652423391652011-09-25T19:22:45.905-05:002011-09-25T19:22:45.905-05:00I thought your centus was great. I could almost h...I thought your centus was great. I could almost hear the conversation as I read.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-36078199721319310022011-09-25T14:51:53.906-05:002011-09-25T14:51:53.906-05:00This sounded very natural, your dialogue flows rea...This sounded very natural, your dialogue flows really well. I really dislike writing dialogue, you hit the nail on the head with your contribution! Thanks, I enjoyed this a lot.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-24608003918920055322011-09-25T13:30:16.971-05:002011-09-25T13:30:16.971-05:00Ames- having trouble getting to your post.Ames- having trouble getting to your post.Kathy Felsted Usherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-64346927197152637472011-09-25T13:21:25.036-05:002011-09-25T13:21:25.036-05:00LOL!
Ames- I thought of that but the response w...LOL! <br /><br />Ames- I thought of that but the response would have upped my word count. Something sarcastic along the lines of what part of the food pyramid does gin fit in?<br /><br />Beckyp- You can still smoke in the bars out here. We're rural and the laws haven't made it yet. It is in the next county over so it'll be here at some point. Of course, with some of the bars out this way, and I've never been in them, I don't think I'd ask the gentlemen to extinguish the cigarette!<br /><br />Thanks, everyone. It's fun if nothing else.Kathy Felsted Usherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471923897561942341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-70713604019578606452011-09-25T12:15:02.148-05:002011-09-25T12:15:02.148-05:00Very awesome! You certainly created a picture in m...Very awesome! You certainly created a picture in my mind, as if I was there!!Candy C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07863818451136277378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-32921011868202069512011-09-25T11:07:18.317-05:002011-09-25T11:07:18.317-05:00lol where on earth can you smoke in a bar any more...lol where on earth can you smoke in a bar any more? great centusTo the Toy Box and Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09664470779483733379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-66222322174582219952011-09-25T10:41:10.549-05:002011-09-25T10:41:10.549-05:00Pretty good dialogue. Smoke will kill you? What ab...Pretty good dialogue. Smoke will kill you? What about the alcohol? Six of one, half a dozen of the other!~AmesAmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5456195848900902802.post-90195479331276102672011-09-25T10:10:14.794-05:002011-09-25T10:10:14.794-05:00Yikes! What's a pretty girl like you....
Grea...Yikes! What's a pretty girl like you....<br />Great take on the prompt, Kathy!!! Brava!!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.com